Bella loses her last living relative and falls into a deep depression. She also has an ex-boyfriend whom she can't get away from. Can a gruff contractor named Edward bring her out of the darkness? Rated M for lemons and language. OC.
Twilight - Rated: M - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 40 - Words: 337,131 - Reviews: 4633 - Updated: 8-8-12 - Published: 1-7-11 - Edward & Bella - Complete
Edward is mean to bella in the beginning, but once you find out the real source of his pain, you'll forgive him everything I've been mostly a fluff reader for the past year, but I let in an emotional one every once in awhile b/c sometimes the trials make the rewards so much sweeter; this is one of those fics
littleredfiat wrote:I'd like one too, if it's not too much trouble. Thanks.
guitargirl wrote:littleredfiat wrote:I'd like one too, if it's not too much trouble. Thanks.
I'm not sure I would bother LRF (Hi by the way *waves* .) BB asked for my verdict and I haven't had chance to get back to her yet. (If you're reading this BB, I promise I'll respond soon.) However, this fic annoyed the hell out of me. I quite liked the authors style of writing, but the plot infuriated me as it was so bloody predictable and ridiculous. Every single thing was overdone. Other than E & B the characters were so over the top it was crazy! Her friends and his family felt they had a right to interfere and butt in where it wasn't needed I wanted to strangle the lot of them for being such busybodies!
Bella is weak and cries in nearly every single chapter, Edward is an asshole and I never warmed to him even after finding out why he was an asshole, and her best friend is a complete and utter mouthpiece who thinks she's funny. She's not. Everyone keeps telling Bella what to do, and no-one ever bothers to find out what she actually wants or what her options are. Everything about this fic is over the top and it's a week of my life I'll never get back. There wasn't a single character in this fic that didn't annoy the hell out of me.
I guess I'm getting really picky.
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